6 comments on “How long do I have to wait for the next Toyotathon?

  1. Hi, Rich. I dropped by because you requested feedback in the Showcase forum, and I’m a critic-at-large.

    I think your ideas are funny, and your sense of comic timing is good, however you need to make sure you check small terms and the source of the jokes. Toyota can’t have a bad “wrap” unless you are gift-wrapping one poorly. Your available alternatives are either “rap” (urban colloquial) or “rep” (short for reputation). The car that exploded in rear-end collisions was the Pinto, not the Pacer. Pacers were awfully ugly, however. You can probably do something comedic with that.

    Overall, you have a nice, light touch. Your article was fun to read. Good luck to you.

  2. Thanks so much for the feedback Mikey, it’s really appreciated and I did the edits you recommended. Please come back often, I promise MORE polls!


Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out /  Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )


Connecting to %s